Poetry Corner – Smoke Alarm

The world around me is potent

There’s a buzzing in the air

The smoke clouds my judgement

I listen, waiting for the aware

Writing – My actual GCSE answer 36/40

I got 36/40 for this question: 23/24 for content and 13/16 for grammar. I have changed a couple of grammatical errors that I spotted but other then that and a word I had to guess at because it was covered by the examiners marking, it is completely unchanged.